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SCENE 1 (3s): Close-up. Suburban high school parking lot, late afternoon, overcast sky, low gray light. A white American teenage girl, mid-teens, stands on crutches, backpack over one shoulder. A crumpled paper cup flies in from off-screen and hits her in the shoulder. It bounces off. She flinches hard — then freezes, jaw clenched, eyes glassy, staring straight ahead. She does not cry. She does not move. SCENE 2 (4s): Cut to: A white American teenage boy, 17, letterman jacket, leaning halfway out of a silver car window. His expression is over-the-top, theatrical mockery — wide grin, eyebrows raised, performing for his audience. He holds up his arms and mimics limping with huge, exaggerated movements, dragging one leg. His friends inside the car erupt in loud laughter. The boy points at the girl and doubles over, gasping. Then: sharp zoom into the boy's face — mouth wide open, eyes wild with laughter. THE BOY speaks [shouting, grinning] — ZOOM ON: the boy's face: "Ohhh watch out everybody — here comes Hop-Along!" SCENE 3 (3s): Cut to: Ground level. A mud-caked combat boot hits the asphalt. One step. Heavy. Deliberate. Then another. Camera tilts up slowly — worn camouflage uniform, name tape reading MILLER, arms loose at the sides. The soldier is white, mid-forties, physically imposing, expression flat and unreadable. He walks toward the car without hurrying. SCENE 4 (5s): Cut to: The boy's face — the laughter dies instantly. His grin collapses, eyes go wide, body pulls back into the seat, shoulders up to his ears. He cannot hold eye contact. Sharp zoom into the soldier's face — jaw set, eyes locked on the boy, completely calm. THE SOLDIER speaks [quiet, no anger] — ZOOM ON: the soldier's face: "You think that's funny?" Immediate cut. Sharp zoom into the boy's face — pale, lips pressed together, voice cracking. THE BOY speaks [voice cracking] — ZOOM ON: the boy's face: "No, sir. No." NO logos, NO brand names, NO watermarks, NO text overlays, NO subtitles. Cinematic, grounded realism, Netflix short-form drama tone.

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SCENE 1 (3s): Close-up. Suburban high school parking lot, late afternoon, overcast sky, low gray light. A white Ameri...

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