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SETTING Upscale American hotel entrance on prom night, glass doors behind a wide set of stone steps and a long black stretch limousine at the curb | Night | Warm string lights strung overhead in soft amber rows, a cold wash from the lobby spilling out through the glass, faint headlight glow from the roundabout | Music thumping faintly from inside the ballroom, the sidewalk suddenly silent All characters are white American, contemporary U.S. setting. CHARACTERS MAYA: 17, long dark hair pinned back, slim build, simple sky-blue floor-length dress, small clutch slipping from her fingers, red print of a palm already rising on her cheek — stunned stillness, one hand pressed flat against the black metal of the limo. TYLER: 18, sandy blonde hair styled up, broad-shouldered quarterback build, open black tuxedo jacket and loosened bowtie, flushed with alcohol and performance, right hand still raised mid-laugh as he turns back to his friends. JAKE: 24, lean military build, crisp black chauffeur's uniform with silver buttons, black driver's cap pulled low, composed stillness — the quiet of someone who has already decided what happens next. ONE-SHOT SCENE WITH TIMING 0:00–0:02 — Extreme close-up on Maya's cheek at the precise moment of impact; Tyler's open palm lands with a sharp crack, her head snaps a quarter-turn, her clutch slips from her fingers toward the pavement in soft focus. A slow motivated arc begins around her as the sidewalk chatter stalls into silence and a girl off-frame lets out a raw "oh my god." 0:02–0:04 — Arc continues as Maya's shoulder hits the side of the black limo; her palm flattens against the metal, eyes closing for one beat then opening — steady, unblinking, the red print blooming on her cheekbone. Tyler, oblivious, half-turns to his friends, already laughing for the cameras. 0:04–0:06 — The arc travels along the limo's black flank, drawn by the slow mechanical rise of the driver's door swinging open. Jake steps out, uniform crisp under the amber string lights, cap pulled low; he does not look at Tyler — he looks across the roof at Maya. 0:06–0:08 — Camera settles on a tight single on Jake as his jaw sets once; his hand rises and lifts the cap from his head with careful precision, revealing the flat military haircut beneath. He sets the cap on the roof of the limo. String lights catch the short hair, the cold resolve in his eyes. 0:08–0:10 — Push-in continues past Jake's shoulder as he steps around the front of the limo toward Tyler. Tyler turns; his laugh dies on his face, smirk collapsing into a sharp audible inhale, his raised hand lowering without him noticing. Final held frame: Jake's boots stopping four feet from Tyler's, the black cap still sitting on the limo's roof between them, string lights glowing warm above. KEY DIALOGUE TYLER (laughing, performative, trailing off): "Did you see her face? Did you —" JAKE (quiet, flat, almost gentle): "That's my sister." TECHNICAL NOTES No logos, brand names, watermarks, signage, or on-screen text Natural motion and physics; realistic hand tremors and breathing rhythms Coherent spatial relationships maintained throughout the single take Realistic eye contact, proximity, and micro-reactions Single continuous take — no cuts, no scene breaks, no transitions